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05/17/2008

more positive attitude

If I put characters here. You'd have a root or trunk.

A narrower field. With two boys in it. A girl at home.

But it's made of exhibition. It's made of praise.

Guess we''ll have to be not broken but terminal.

Spirits in tall grass that isn't only tall grass but tall grass.

Here you are. And I. Here.

So why not two girls in it. And a boy at home.

Why not a tremor. But where. 

Comments

Cool. Something about this one strikes a cord. I don't know what it is about it, but it is just cool =).

A short yet complete peoplescape. There's room for baubles if you like and sensed emotions that dart forward and back in time. Nothing fake.

Thanks for the response, Jack.

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